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[2023/ 12/ 16] The table below shows the household composition in a North America country in 1970 and 2003.

【主体段分段】：

方法1：按照 类型 分段【本篇文章采用此种分段方法】

family household+other member sharing一段

non-family household一段

方法2：按照 时间 分段

【开头段】

The table compares different types of household in a country in North America for the year 1970 and 2003.

【概述段】

It is clear thatfor both years, married coupleaccounted for the highestpercentageamong all the categories of household,whereasthe least number of people chose to share a room with non-relatives.

思路要点：

- 两年中，married couple占比都最高

- room sharing占比都最低

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatthe percentage of people living with their marital partnerswitnessed a remarkable dropfrom 61% in 1970 to 41% in 2003.In both years, roughly 20% of children lived with one of their parents, with 10% of them living with their fathers, and the rest 10% were raised by their mothers.Likewise,a period of steadiness couldalsobe found inthe percentage of people who lived with other relatives, with the figure of approximately 13%.

思路要点：family household

- married couple：显著性下降，61%→41%

- 单亲家庭的孩子两年内总共都是20%，其中10%和father住，10%和mother住

- other member sharing的比例：也持平在13%左右

【Body 2】

We can also find thatthere emerged an upward trend inthe proportion of people choosing not to live with their family members.In the year 1970, around 4% of the surveyed people either opted to live alone or share a room with others.After 33 years, the figure for people living by themselvesjumped to13%, and thefigure forpeople who lived with non-relativesalmost tripled.

思路要点：non-family household

- 上升趋势

- 1970年：single和room sharing都大约为4%

- 2003年：single剧增到13%，room sharing几乎上涨3倍